Feedback on the report chapter I wrote:
This whole section needs to be edited and rewritten by someone who can write it for the average reader. It sounds too complicated and bureaucratic. It was obviously written with intelligence. It needs to be re-written for the common man.
Friday, August 29, 2008
Story Of My Life
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Yeah, with your big words and your intellect. Stop being smart and who knows, maybe you could get elected president? It's happened before... :/
Ouch! I'm amazed this doesn't say it needs to be "dumbed down."
In my book smart and thoughtful are REALLy good things.
Owwww. (That's my intelligent comment. See?)
Did a republican review that report?
Arg.
I've always tried, but with little success, to heed Mark Twain's advice: Know the big words, use the small words.
Argh. Well, perhaps you should hire a USA Today writer to help you out.
Damn. You're too smart for them.
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